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[Otterclou]

Hello Daggers! About time i join in. I need to improve tons, so please hit me with any critique you got!
Tryin to go pro, lessgo

Craig Mullins study:


Mecha, posted a version with the steps on http://www.otterclou.se too

[Toxicpanda]

Portraits look really good,hope you will post more of those.
Nice studies btw :D
That kid mecha is kinda scary.
Welcome to forum and have fun :)

[Otterclou]

thank you very much Toxicpanda! Will definitely post more portraits :)

Here´s how the mecha turned out

[iCi]

Nice, mech has the old school feel to it, looking forward to see more, especially the hard surface stuff.

[Otterclou]

thank you very much iCi! more hardsurface coming!

[Samszym]

Really cool stuff dude!
I think you mechs can sometimes look a little flat because of the perfect front views of the legs and all the flat horizontal lines, if those were receding to a vanishing point I think they would seem a lot more believable. But maybe you're going for that flat designy look, in which case nevermind XD

In any case, I'm really liking the designs and studies, looking forward to more work!

[Markus]

Very nice stuff man! Clean rendering.
With your polished works, I think you could add some depth to them with texture work, and having minute details in places of interest.
And like Samszym pointed out, avoid dead angles if you can as they tend to make things look flat and uninteresting.

[Otterclou]

Samszym, thank you! totally agree about the VP. thanks for stopping by!

Markus: thanks, i really appreciate the input! will try to work on it.

[Rindoukan]

very cool stuff.Keep it up. I really like the design language you have.

[Otterclou]

thank you very much Rindoukan! i appreciate that

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