04-26-2016, 02:18 PM
Hey here's a quick crit and paintover!
First thing that jumps out with your image, is everything is very smooth, as if it's all made of the same material. so I added some quick texture on the creature.
I enlarged the creature to make him appear more terrifying, and follow the rule of thirds a little better.
unified the lighting and added a secondary warmer light source to help define the forms in shadow and add cool vs warm contrast. Also darkened the moon and sky around his head a little so the creature stands out - light on dark dark on light.
Also may bay a little goofy but I added some red eyes just to push the monster as the focal.
First thing that jumps out with your image, is everything is very smooth, as if it's all made of the same material. so I added some quick texture on the creature.
I enlarged the creature to make him appear more terrifying, and follow the rule of thirds a little better.
unified the lighting and added a secondary warmer light source to help define the forms in shadow and add cool vs warm contrast. Also darkened the moon and sky around his head a little so the creature stands out - light on dark dark on light.
Also may bay a little goofy but I added some red eyes just to push the monster as the focal.