Stuck and looking for critiques
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There are plenty of people on here that can give you critique on your painting as well Ravel so don't be afraid to post those as well.

Not sure what you mean by ping - some kind of auto alert when you tag my name?  I don't think we have that on here.

OK so I noticed a structural problem with your drawing of the boy with the black wings.  His left shoulder is a bit too high.  I've sketched in some construction lines to illustrate what I mean.  Hope this helps:



“Today, give a stranger one of your smiles. It might be the only sunshine he sees all day.” -- H. Jackson Brown Jr.

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Stuck and looking for critiques - by Ravel - 07-02-2016, 05:24 AM
RE: Stuck and looking for critiques - by Ravel - 07-02-2016, 08:54 AM
RE: Stuck and looking for critiques - by Artloader - 07-02-2016, 12:04 PM
RE: Stuck and looking for critiques - by Ravel - 07-02-2016, 10:40 PM
RE: Stuck and looking for critiques - by Ravel - 07-02-2016, 11:13 PM
RE: Stuck and looking for critiques - by Ravel - 07-02-2016, 11:27 PM

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