07-06-2016, 10:21 AM
Hey Neo!! It's great you are doing the Draw a Box exercises too, you did a great job on these!! Did you submit your homework on /r/artfundamentals? Uncomfortable will give you feedback on how you did if you do. :) I have one bit of crit, though–on the form intersections, you kind of messed up on the line weights. You made some of the inner lines really dark, which makes the box look totally broken apart.
You should darken the lines at the edge of the form and keep in the inner lines a bit lighter, like this:
Watch out for that, and keep up the great work!
You should darken the lines at the edge of the form and keep in the inner lines a bit lighter, like this:
Watch out for that, and keep up the great work!
"Drawing is a skill like hammering a nail. You might not be great at it yet, but there is nothing stopping you from gettin' down and hammering away." -Irshad Karim
Sketchbook!
Sketchbook!