09-29-2016, 11:53 PM
Here is my thought. I like the flow of this creature and color you choose. But the values and lighting a bit off.
Look here. For me personally I don't quite understand where is the light source. I see that it should be behind him but in that case values will be a bit different (sorry, messaging from work, don't have a tablet here to do overpaint). So watch that. And another minor thing - that spot on its spine where separation from wing to spine goes. It's seems like the wing and spine do not separate. That place should be darker. I hope it'll help. Looking forward to see more.
Look here. For me personally I don't quite understand where is the light source. I see that it should be behind him but in that case values will be a bit different (sorry, messaging from work, don't have a tablet here to do overpaint). So watch that. And another minor thing - that spot on its spine where separation from wing to spine goes. It's seems like the wing and spine do not separate. That place should be darker. I hope it'll help. Looking forward to see more.