11-20-2016, 02:42 AM
Thanks a lot for your comment i apreciate any feedback :)
When it comes to the storytelling I will probably
bring more characters into the scene to make the situation more believeable maybe a kid too.
The whole scene is about the explorers/hunters that are trying to find food and hunt other animals
and they mostly avoid the giants .
Maybe i will clarify that by bringing in leather/fur clothing, hunting weapons and making the giant more dangerous.
(I'm sorry if this was hard to read, I'm not writing in english very often)
okay so this is the current wip :
and here are some studies:
When it comes to the storytelling I will probably
bring more characters into the scene to make the situation more believeable maybe a kid too.
The whole scene is about the explorers/hunters that are trying to find food and hunt other animals
and they mostly avoid the giants .
Maybe i will clarify that by bringing in leather/fur clothing, hunting weapons and making the giant more dangerous.
(I'm sorry if this was hard to read, I'm not writing in english very often)
okay so this is the current wip :
and here are some studies: