General Crits Needed
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Hey Jackson welcome to Crimson Daggers :).

I like the way you've painted this piece, the realistic rendering coupled with the impossible facial expression gives this a real sinister feel to it.

One thing I might be able to help you with is the body shape.  I think you could do more to indicate the shape of his arms, shoulders and chest.

I've done a quick thumbnail to show what I mean but I also recommend studying from Proko's YouTube channel and books like Michael Hampton's Figure Drawing Design and Invention or Andrew Loomis's Figure Drawing For All It's Worth.

Hope this helps anyway:



“Today, give a stranger one of your smiles. It might be the only sunshine he sees all day.” -- H. Jackson Brown Jr.

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General Crits Needed - by jacksonb57 - 12-11-2016, 02:31 PM
RE: General Crits Needed - by Artloader - 12-13-2016, 09:32 AM

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