12-17-2016, 10:29 PM
Here's a crit:
His palms are bloody. Knees weak. Arms are heavy. There's blood on his tunic already..
Or is it mom's spaghetti? :)
His palms are bloody. Knees weak. Arms are heavy. There's blood on his tunic already..
Or is it mom's spaghetti? :)
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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