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01-20-2017, 12:31 PM
Hi!
Overall it looks very nice so far. I like the color composition and the mood. Is it finished? It looks like it is still a work in progress, probably because of the rough edges. Also the main focus, which is the rocky entrance to a dungeon maybe?, looks a little uninteresting in it's shape. I think it needs more variety. Also the composition of the rock clusters in front of the entrance look a bit unnatural. Maybe adding a bit more perspective to them and sharpening the edges would help?

I hope this helps!
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Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 11-25-2016, 10:26 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by John - 11-27-2016, 06:26 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Artloader - 11-27-2016, 06:28 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Anton_Fort - 11-27-2016, 06:35 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by mnogueira - 11-27-2016, 08:43 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 11-28-2016, 09:59 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Bledley - 12-01-2016, 06:27 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 12-05-2016, 07:24 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 12-10-2016, 07:32 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 12-26-2016, 12:46 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by JavierP - 12-26-2016, 09:27 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 12-26-2016, 08:42 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 12-27-2016, 08:43 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 01-04-2017, 12:53 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by ZombieChinchilla - 01-04-2017, 01:01 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 01-08-2017, 05:54 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 01-12-2017, 09:19 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by AngeliquevdMee - 01-12-2017, 09:26 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 01-12-2017, 10:20 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by gregorkari - 01-12-2017, 11:15 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 01-20-2017, 02:10 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by AlexShi - 01-20-2017, 12:31 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 01-20-2017, 07:18 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 02-01-2017, 07:30 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by alexdanila - 02-02-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by alexdanila - 02-03-2017, 09:53 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 02-07-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by NoodleInBox - 02-07-2017, 05:46 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Danny - 02-08-2017, 02:22 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 02-08-2017, 05:18 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Axrel - 02-08-2017, 02:10 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 02-16-2017, 01:55 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 03-01-2017, 09:59 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by VoodooMama - 03-05-2017, 11:01 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 03-28-2017, 05:40 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by alexdanila - 03-28-2017, 11:54 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 03-29-2017, 12:23 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by alexdanila - 03-29-2017, 12:28 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Hozure - 03-29-2017, 01:16 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 03-30-2017, 06:21 AM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 04-25-2017, 07:12 PM
RE: Ice's Journey - by Ice Rider - 05-09-2017, 03:08 AM

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