SweatBook - Wet & Messy

[Anton_Fort]

I did a quick paintover. Well, not really a paintover, just to show you your mistake, which you have a lot. First of all, your composition. The space around your objects is too wide. Second thing is that your objects are "flying", there is no surface beneath it. There is no form to your objects, incorrect perspective, problems with values. Well, I wrote all those things. Cheers. Hope that'll help.