02-26-2017, 08:33 PM
you've got some great rendering skills, that first picture in #167 is awesome
great lighting in this last moon picture too
for cc in terms of your line work specifically (this applies less to your rendered stuff) think it'd be great to see you explore more of the longer-lined, loose style like in the wings of the character in #167. you do great precision line work that i think could be really complimented well with some more broader, loose line work, i think it'd help solidify and ground some of of your figures more too, getting the overall flow and gesture among various body parts linked up together more, (eg having single gesture lines connect upper and lower body limbs) because some of your work looks quite photographic in the sense of being constructed up with lots of small elements without a larger underlying thread connecting them up you know?
anyway really great work, keep it up!
great lighting in this last moon picture too
for cc in terms of your line work specifically (this applies less to your rendered stuff) think it'd be great to see you explore more of the longer-lined, loose style like in the wings of the character in #167. you do great precision line work that i think could be really complimented well with some more broader, loose line work, i think it'd help solidify and ground some of of your figures more too, getting the overall flow and gesture among various body parts linked up together more, (eg having single gesture lines connect upper and lower body limbs) because some of your work looks quite photographic in the sense of being constructed up with lots of small elements without a larger underlying thread connecting them up you know?
anyway really great work, keep it up!
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