04-12-2017, 12:42 AM
@Klexvier
Great work! I like your curved dynamic lines in your notan sketches and well painted 5 value ones!
@Amit
I really appriciate your critique!
I realized the crushed value in the foreground after checking it on other monitor which is a little bit more pricise (but it's not enough calibrated I think).
I refined or restructured values, shapes and colors overall and also concerned about shape language of the tree in the foreground but I I struggled with it.
Hmm...maybe there is still some mistakes about value or shape.
I actually feel strange but I don't know what to say...
Thanks!
Great work! I like your curved dynamic lines in your notan sketches and well painted 5 value ones!
@Amit
I really appriciate your critique!
I realized the crushed value in the foreground after checking it on other monitor which is a little bit more pricise (but it's not enough calibrated I think).
I refined or restructured values, shapes and colors overall and also concerned about shape language of the tree in the foreground but I I struggled with it.
Hmm...maybe there is still some mistakes about value or shape.
I actually feel strange but I don't know what to say...
Thanks!