varbas is a noob

[Fedodika]

bro I'm just gonna throw this in there, don't take it personal; I think this character your working on is a waste of time, he looks weird, with everything the proportions, the face, the way the leg connects to the hips, the feet, the hands everything.

I think you should keep working on those line studies which are looking promising. Keep doing that, stop rendering for a while. The marco study looks fantastic because the drawing and the foundations are there but when I scroll down i just wince I think "man if only he could plan out a drawing like that marko piece."

The design, like the choices you made for the clothing are good and stylish, but they are flawed in their perspective; I'm going to do some paintovers so you can SEE what I mean. 

Look more into line weight, and what you can do with just line when it comes to rendering. You only seem to have one style when it comes to that of just indicating what you see. Also, your boxes on your construction are a bit skewed and made of flawed shapes, I left a few examples. Do some Drawabox dude, DOOOO EEETTT!!