Caricature commission

[JyonnyNovice]

I had a go at changing the image like Alfonso suggested but, to get maximum use of an A4 sheet of paper I'd have had to redraw quite a lot or end up with it cropped in a not so good way. However, I believe I solved the problem of too busy / too many heads. I think the lighting looks ok now, values ok... maybe xD let me know what you think of these two, A or B.

A: Lower contrast, more detail in the darks



B: Higher contrast, crushed out some detail in the darks




I like B but can never be sure if I am pushing the contrast just a bit too much. Feedback much appreciated!