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I would suggest you study multiple lighting scenario.As i find this one not helping show form.

I do not feel the roundess of the neck the value change doesn't change rapidly enought to indicate a cylinder like form

I also feel the texture you applied for the hair section doesn't indicate accurately what i think is leaf
A leaf as alway as center line(vein) that branch into smaller one.Not random veins as far as i know.Try to base you texture on observation not just blindly applying indication.Try to understand the grouping and direction and the shadow pattern of a texture because texture is also value change on a different scale.''A texture is way to complex to be accurate we strive as artist to create the illusion of texture''

Maybe you could try to do a few study of plant
http://drawabox.com/lesson/3


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Pushing this further? - by ixspen - 01-22-2018, 06:23 AM
RE: Pushing this further? - by darktiste - 01-22-2018, 06:49 AM
RE: Pushing this further? - by ixspen - 01-22-2018, 09:08 AM
RE: Pushing this further? - by darktiste - 01-22-2018, 11:13 AM
RE: Pushing this further? - by ixspen - 01-22-2018, 12:46 PM
RE: Pushing this further? - by darktiste - 01-22-2018, 03:00 PM
RE: Pushing this further? - by ixspen - 01-23-2018, 02:40 AM

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