Hobitt-hole

[Fedodika]

this is a very cool setup you have going my man, loving the overlaps and texture and value placement, story depth narrative. Only thing that needs work is the head, give the ears some more loving, and remember the skull has a bone, like the cheekbone, which you have indicated but its contour is very straight and in reality that juts out a bit. The place you have indicated the ear, makes it look like its hanging off the back of the skull, and it should be a little closer to the front, like feel on your head the space behind the ear;

Good work tho dude, movin on up!