06-30-2018, 09:38 PM
(06-30-2018, 10:57 AM)darktiste Wrote: I think you could reinforce the overlapping by adding the arm behind because atm it hidden and it could be pointing toward the figure in the distance to add a bit more direction.Also try to remember to use the rule of third for extra point of focal point.I also have added some framing element with smoke to add more drama and i also putted a magic effect going into the foreground to bring back the viewer eye.
Yeah the hand didn't used to be going back but it was making a nasty tangent with the sword so I just kind of got rid of it and told myself I'll figure it out later. I did have it kind of pointing in the way you repainted at one point but I like how his face is aimed up at the jumping dude. With the hand and the magic stuff its maybe pointing a little too much but I'll give it a go and see whats happens. Thanks