01-31-2019, 03:37 AM
I like the succubus girl she has a unique and cute face..
The Jade is good, i think to enhance her appearance you could make her face more stylized, as her face is like a very literal asian woman, maybe make her nose less wide, and dial back the skin texture, as that seldom makes a female face more beautiful. Its pretty solid though, i mean, as far as her appearing tough and powerful, it does a good job. and nice work on the neck and clavicle area.
Mileena, shes a tough character as far as getting the overall essence. she has sexy eyes but a terrifying monster like mouth. I feel like with your depiction, she seems nonchalant and loses a lot of her very deviant evil personality, like what comes to mind when i think of her
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/A-TwfTRtAdU/maxresdefault.jpg
and if anything, really really push her mouth, like the gums and the intricate evil she can portray with her mouth. Right now i feel its caught between the two extremes and ends up in uncanny valley. I feel mileena would strike that pose with her mask on, to pretend to be harmless and sexy, but not with it off, shed know shed been exposed
The Jade is good, i think to enhance her appearance you could make her face more stylized, as her face is like a very literal asian woman, maybe make her nose less wide, and dial back the skin texture, as that seldom makes a female face more beautiful. Its pretty solid though, i mean, as far as her appearing tough and powerful, it does a good job. and nice work on the neck and clavicle area.
Mileena, shes a tough character as far as getting the overall essence. she has sexy eyes but a terrifying monster like mouth. I feel like with your depiction, she seems nonchalant and loses a lot of her very deviant evil personality, like what comes to mind when i think of her
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/A-TwfTRtAdU/maxresdefault.jpg
and if anything, really really push her mouth, like the gums and the intricate evil she can portray with her mouth. Right now i feel its caught between the two extremes and ends up in uncanny valley. I feel mileena would strike that pose with her mask on, to pretend to be harmless and sexy, but not with it off, shed know shed been exposed
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]