05-08-2019, 02:05 AM
(05-07-2019, 11:54 AM)chubby_cat Wrote: Really like the artistic style direction you are doing. It's super cute and super fun.
No real crits. Only thing that's immediately sticking out on the latest piece is that the boy doesn't feel like he's interacting with the ground. He kinda feels like he's floating. It's either the perspective of his feet, or the direction of the shadow behind him.
In terms of social media - I feel ya man. It's a pain with sometimes a very slow, or no, reward. It is worth doing though and getting your work out there. Just gotta turn updating social media into a weekly habit and it'll feel like less of a chore over time
Yea I agree it's like he was cut from a different image and just pasted on to this one :D it's horrible. I tried all sorts of things to fix the image but the problems are all composition and drawing based so nothing really worked all that well.
The bush edge right behind him was a big problem so I made the shape just a circle and that helped out, his pose is super stiff and awkward but I kind of like that because of how cheesy it looks so I don't want to change it too much.
Moving the fire helped out a lot but there's still a lot of tangents that are a bitch to fix because of how tightly packed everything is. A flawed composition and drawing can't really be fixed with more painting but I think at least now it looks better than before.
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