07-13-2019, 04:39 PM
Not feeling the flow of this piece those pillar lead the eye out of the composition in my opinion.There a thing that also bother me with the creature hand being hidden behind the arm it can be confusing to the viewer.One other thing is how you also have hide the other wing once again creating confusion.If you know anything about wing you know that those wing don't enable flight.That tail also is oddly cylindrical where it should be merging with the rest of the body.
Other then that it a challenge to show an aerial combat from a top down view and i think you did pretty well on that point.
Other then that it a challenge to show an aerial combat from a top down view and i think you did pretty well on that point.