Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff

[darktiste]

First impression

Scale and perspective of the tree seem off on that witch piece and i feel like you give to much room for little detail to take away from the focus of the story telling.

Here some of the touch up i did.


I Increase the shadow inside the lower ground.

I Add up some fog in the foreground to counter balance the strong foreground element.

Overall i made the character more darker to make it pop against the light background.

And Work in away to assure that i keep the focus toward the face of the character


For suggestion
 i would say try to add some kind of leaf trail behind her to show movement so it not so ''static'' 

Finally simplify your shape to help the composition.