Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook
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I like the colors, but some of the tones are really strong in some places... remember strong color draws the eye, and if all there is is strong color, theres less contrast. Like you have the cape bright red and the claw mark bright purple, and then the background has a lot of saturation. my reccomendation is take a colorize layer, take a cool tone and brush it over some things like the lower part of the male figure, or maybe even the top and try to balance the temperature. I did a painting a while back with a similar color mistake where it was all too strong, here it is and a few other examples to show you that oversaturation can kill the focus

https://www.deviantart.com/fedodika/art/...-756240101
https://www.deviantart.com/fedodika/art/...-687576907
https://www.deviantart.com/fedodika/art/...-691988867
https://www.deviantart.com/fedodika/art/...-642381141

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Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Rotohail - 10-06-2019, 06:54 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-07-2019, 09:52 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by DK - 10-07-2019, 12:04 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by DK - 10-08-2019, 09:55 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-08-2019, 11:19 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-10-2019, 12:13 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-11-2019, 01:05 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-12-2019, 09:33 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Fedodika - 10-14-2019, 08:33 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-15-2019, 11:12 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-16-2019, 08:14 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-18-2019, 10:23 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-19-2019, 01:20 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jephyr - 10-22-2019, 05:26 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-24-2019, 08:02 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 10-27-2019, 03:37 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 11-02-2019, 11:05 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by 879 - 11-04-2019, 03:34 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by 879 - 11-05-2019, 03:17 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jephyr - 11-07-2019, 06:51 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 11-08-2019, 10:52 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jephyr - 11-19-2019, 09:45 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 11-14-2019, 10:29 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by John - 11-23-2019, 09:22 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by John - 11-23-2019, 09:39 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 12-03-2019, 09:53 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Shuty - 12-16-2019, 05:42 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 04-14-2020, 09:09 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 04-23-2020, 12:15 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Gliger - 05-04-2020, 09:24 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jeso - 05-16-2020, 12:12 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jeso - 05-20-2020, 09:17 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jeso - 05-25-2020, 01:10 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Danny - 05-27-2020, 07:52 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jeso - 06-02-2020, 12:00 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Danny - 06-03-2020, 06:29 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jeso - 06-03-2020, 06:55 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Danny - 06-03-2020, 07:26 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Shuty - 06-05-2020, 03:09 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 06-07-2020, 01:22 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by DK - 06-08-2020, 06:55 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Jeso - 06-12-2020, 06:26 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Gliger - 06-12-2020, 11:20 AM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Gliger - 06-13-2020, 02:20 PM
RE: Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook - by Leo Ki - 06-15-2020, 10:55 AM

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