(08-07-2020, 09:07 PM)ognjiša Wrote: Thanks Andrew!! Your critiques are always very helpful. Idk if you saw i sent you a dm asking for a paintover, but i kinda figured you would do it regardless
Here's the final thing, i did most of the things you painted over
and i redid the main characters hands
Thanks again Andrew : D
Most welcome,
I did get the PM haha
I think the revised version looks great!
Fantastic piece
*there is a stroke of purple going over his stick above his hand, that's probably not intended
Just gonna have to say that on the priest piece you could do better with your cast shadow.Try when you get your layers selected to right click and than go to perspective if your using photoshop and play around with your shadow shape until you feel like it a decently in perspective.But i am probably not teaching you anything but if i did try that super easy and quick to do and it anchor down your figure even just on a plain white back ground.Keep going we need your inspiring stuff around here.
This remind me somehow of The Dark Crystal Age of Resistance specially the kid in cage aspect.I think your biggest issue probably will be avoiding over rendering and maintain the contrast were you want the eye to go.
Really dig your sketchbook, ognjiša. I admire the sheer volume of art you are able to pump out, and to a high quality to boot. Your use of colours in you latest illustration is *chefs kiss* - the orange contrasting with the green is very nice. The boy is the same character from the moon piece on the previous page, right?
the scene is looking awesome,
love how the bridge doubles as a dinner table!
the characters on the very left look a bit forced to line up there but the rendering is looking great
I hope you'll put the time to finish this one strong
Damn man your killing it :) Haven't got much to offer feedback wise, just keep doing what you are doing. Btw I'm really digging those shaman designs! :)
Very good looking sketchbook. I especially like the way you handled line-weight on those portraits. - Clear line at front of the face, 'sketchy' at the back. Very good design-sense too. Hat's down sir.
you are on fire, great qualities coming through in your work.
I saw you're goblin piece in Tyler Edlins vid, I watched it cos i saw your piece in the thumbnail.
haha. Well done on that one and all the recent stuff. the quality and volume of work is great man
My first impression was that your as consistent as ever.If i may engage in nitpicking it would probably be at the level of your choose of color choose i personally find that if this is a poster from afar it just seem to muted in term of contrast in contrast to the background.So i did a few adjustment playing with the image adjustment option in photoshop and i think it help the poster to read better from a far but the mood is somewhat less swampy and now more ocean lslash adventure like which is i believe what you were going toward since your character had shell like armor piece.I think the vibe that is lost is probably the dark vibe that you might have been going for.Since you seem into dark story kind of vibe you know the kind of story you tell your kid so they can't sleep at night...
Thank you, Andrew!
And yeah Darkiste i def see what you're going for, i think something right in the middle of your and mine version would work the best, thank you!
Mindblowing stuff like always, you always mesmerize with the output you have while keeping with the quality. Not sure if you shoot yourself caffeine directly into your veins or literally are a robot powered by a fusion core but either way, roll on! Congrats on whatever contest I've missed I've read you won over. Thumbs up!