10-17-2019, 05:59 AM
i think the colored one has the same color issues and the rythm of the image is concave as in the energy is slamming into one place. Id either push it like all the way, or try a totally different rythm. Also the colors are way too strong again, hot purple against hot orange; use hues to compliment each other, not to compete for attention.
Like if we painted a red starcraft marine, his red suit would dominate the image if we werent careful with our values and hues. Id take his suit and put most of it in a cool shadow, it'd still read as a "red" object but would be a lot easier on the eyes.
The skulls are fantastic, A+ on those
The profile girl, you could arch her back a lot more to push the drama, right now its stiff
this random pic shows the kinda arch im talking about
https://previews.123rf.com/images/scottf...and-re.jpg
keep rockin the boat
Like if we painted a red starcraft marine, his red suit would dominate the image if we werent careful with our values and hues. Id take his suit and put most of it in a cool shadow, it'd still read as a "red" object but would be a lot easier on the eyes.
The skulls are fantastic, A+ on those
The profile girl, you could arch her back a lot more to push the drama, right now its stiff
this random pic shows the kinda arch im talking about
https://previews.123rf.com/images/scottf...and-re.jpg
keep rockin the boat
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]