01-22-2020, 12:11 PM
I definitely agree with Fedo. I like your style with the impressionist, kind of Marco Bucci coloring, but there's a lot of potential for appealing shapes that you don't really take advantage of. Since it seems like you're going for a simplified kind of look that emphasizes color, it really puts even more importance on shape to carry the composition.
In the waterhouse study for example, you go right for the vibrant colors, but you haven't even really defined any forms for the colors to be on! When you take color out of the equation, it's actually very confusing. It would definitely be worth it to slow down a bit.
I like where the bus stop piece is going, the blue and orange is really appealing. I'd like to see how it turns out!
In the waterhouse study for example, you go right for the vibrant colors, but you haven't even really defined any forms for the colors to be on! When you take color out of the equation, it's actually very confusing. It would definitely be worth it to slow down a bit.
I like where the bus stop piece is going, the blue and orange is really appealing. I'd like to see how it turns out!