CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I think a sunrise lightning scenario coming from the right could give alot of impact to this piece to create a strong cast shadow that would guide the eye toward the figure.I also would encourage you think more about your secondary shape and how they can help move the eye across the piece all those box like shape on the ground i would accentuate there shape to be more rectangle i think it would contribute to giving your piece a feeling of speed i would also put some debris and smoke flying off in the distance and other the wheel.Possibly use a blur to accentuate and give a feeling of speed to the piece.Your plane is missing the rotor of the turbine (rotor part that make the blade of the turbine spine).The front windshield should be transparent or tainted but right now we can't see behind it so maybe fix that to and give this part a more glassy texture.