04-04-2020, 09:18 PM
Hey what's up,
Your stuff is generally good and consistent, however in my opinion it never steps into being great/amazing because you're mostly following a formulaic approach in your art and not challenging yourself enough.
One example of this is the poses, maybe you've addressed this before, but just looking at your art everything seems too frontal and too posed, not dynamic or natural.
In my opinion for now here's where you have to improve - drawing - challenge yourself with the poses, don't avoid working on hands, legs, anatomy in general, draw trough forms, as right now there's a lot of things that don't work in space; lineart - tighten it up a bit, it's going to help you understand structure; rendering - it seems you rarely add cast shadows which adds to the images not looking natural, in some places there's too much soft edges, sometimes the wrong planes are reflecting the light where they should actually be in shadow.
I added two sketches to show what I mean by making the sketches more dynamic https://imgur.com/a/piAm5I8
None of this is meant to sound rude, I've just been following your stuff for a while and I think you're capable of making much more impressive work, but some decisions during the drawing and painting process are stopping you from achieving such results.
Your stuff is generally good and consistent, however in my opinion it never steps into being great/amazing because you're mostly following a formulaic approach in your art and not challenging yourself enough.
One example of this is the poses, maybe you've addressed this before, but just looking at your art everything seems too frontal and too posed, not dynamic or natural.
In my opinion for now here's where you have to improve - drawing - challenge yourself with the poses, don't avoid working on hands, legs, anatomy in general, draw trough forms, as right now there's a lot of things that don't work in space; lineart - tighten it up a bit, it's going to help you understand structure; rendering - it seems you rarely add cast shadows which adds to the images not looking natural, in some places there's too much soft edges, sometimes the wrong planes are reflecting the light where they should actually be in shadow.
I added two sketches to show what I mean by making the sketches more dynamic https://imgur.com/a/piAm5I8
None of this is meant to sound rude, I've just been following your stuff for a while and I think you're capable of making much more impressive work, but some decisions during the drawing and painting process are stopping you from achieving such results.