04-10-2020, 07:18 AM
Hi Mika, I like your cyberpunk girl piece - she has a real attitude and personality :).
I think Darktiste has hit on a good point about prioritising drawing. I believe the problem on the face would have been better solved at the drawing stage. She looks to me to be facing slightly to _her_ right and slightly downwards.
That being the case, what I would do is practice some Loomis heads with the orientation of your piece and then get the drawing right.
Also I would almost always grab some references for any pose I was trying to invent - even if it is a piece from imagination.
Anyway I have had a go at a quick paint over for you, hope it helps, if not please ignore :).
Either way keep going :).
I think Darktiste has hit on a good point about prioritising drawing. I believe the problem on the face would have been better solved at the drawing stage. She looks to me to be facing slightly to _her_ right and slightly downwards.
That being the case, what I would do is practice some Loomis heads with the orientation of your piece and then get the drawing right.
Also I would almost always grab some references for any pose I was trying to invent - even if it is a piece from imagination.
Anyway I have had a go at a quick paint over for you, hope it helps, if not please ignore :).
Either way keep going :).
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