04-13-2020, 11:23 AM
I want to bring your attention to where the torn fabric is on he upper leg you did the top section with 2 different brush i think the lower part isn't working.The upper part where the stroke tapper have a more authentic torn feel but you made alot of uniform stroke for me who doesn't make it read as a torn fabric.
One thing i would suggest on a different topic is to do more fabric study i am not totally convince by your understanding of how fabric fold and twist astleast in this one.
Something thing that bother me for some reason is that you use the ellipse tool in the cybernetic part since it the only perfect circle it automatically attracted my eye as it break the the hand drawn feeling that was present in the rest of the piece.
For your metal idk what kind of finish(matte,metallic,chrome) you where going for but i am not to convince either.I think it a general leak of contrast between the lit part and the shadow.If the environnement is mostly yellow around the character you should be getting more yellow into your shadow due to reflected light always something to be aware of.
One thing i would suggest on a different topic is to do more fabric study i am not totally convince by your understanding of how fabric fold and twist astleast in this one.
Something thing that bother me for some reason is that you use the ellipse tool in the cybernetic part since it the only perfect circle it automatically attracted my eye as it break the the hand drawn feeling that was present in the rest of the piece.
For your metal idk what kind of finish(matte,metallic,chrome) you where going for but i am not to convince either.I think it a general leak of contrast between the lit part and the shadow.If the environnement is mostly yellow around the character you should be getting more yellow into your shadow due to reflected light always something to be aware of.