05-05-2020, 07:43 AM
You asked specifically for critique on the head so I'll focus on that. I think I have a picture with a face at practically the same angle you're going for, so have a look: https://www.millaj.com/pics/jh-suzukik3.jpg
I think the main issue is that the contour on the left side of her face (our left, that is) juts out too much. It wouldn't look like that unless her jaw is extremely wide and square. Try making it thinner.
I have no other specific comments. It looks like you are relatively new to drawing and painting, so there is very little that getting more critique can do for you. Actually, critique has limited powers in general, but it is particularly powerless when it comes to beginner work, because the beginner already knows that they have to work on everything. Just keep practicing.
I think the main issue is that the contour on the left side of her face (our left, that is) juts out too much. It wouldn't look like that unless her jaw is extremely wide and square. Try making it thinner.
I have no other specific comments. It looks like you are relatively new to drawing and painting, so there is very little that getting more critique can do for you. Actually, critique has limited powers in general, but it is particularly powerless when it comes to beginner work, because the beginner already knows that they have to work on everything. Just keep practicing.