Joseph's shiny new sketchbook

[Zorrentos]

The fundamentals of the piece are really quite nice! Very good use of brush strokes and color, but I feel like its lacking in the story telling. Can we make it more clear that he is actually sewn together from diffirent bodies? Maybe use a slight shift in hue in the diffirent parts as well as make the scars more prominent.

Here is a quick overpaint I did. I brought the colors more towards muted greens to enhance the sickly/dead mood that I associate with frankenstein. I also added a bit more athmospheric perspective and darkened the edges to bring focus more towards the figure. Hope it helps a bit!