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Pubic Enemy
I see what you mean with the roof not going into perspective, at the mo I just would like to redo all that area into something more interesting. Thank you for pointing it out!

Fedodika
Well my take is that is boring, design wise and yeah! noticed the thing with the empty area being the center of attention, I think I would change the clouds to point back into the building but that would be when I decide what kind of building and layout I would like. Thanks for the other suggestions! I'm basically the same with landscapes, just started a few months back. I really need to make a lot.


Leaving some extra thing from today for a challenge? I dunno, but I thought it would be nice to try before heading to sleep. Supposedly there's a frame from a sailor moon episode and you have to redo it on your style? I might have stretched it too far.
Original

My take



I think bringing the warms back into the shadows would had been nicer, sticking closer to the original palette. I might have toned it down too much. I wanted to go for a more teen/adult take.