05-21-2020, 02:08 PM
My first impression as to do with her head proportion i think it to small but i think it as to do with her elvish nature.You would certainly have a nicer effect in my opinion if you took the time to put what i assume are streak of light in the background on to your character it would had created a nice play on light and show us you understand the form of the body to an ever further level.Idk what the pattern use and how it renforce the story it seem out of place.I tried to play with the filter sometime it nice to try to play with the filter near the end to see what kind of thing unexepted can bring a new light to the piece.Here i tried to limit the pattern in the background and floor and tried to play with your line streak more the shirt was nice but i felt her face alone could stand and i like the coat she had so i tried to bring it forth.Idk i hope you like the result even if it kinda go in a different direction.