Darktiste Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Hey man, just some quick comments on your last update. The figure looks pretty stiff and flat I suggest drawing the body first with cubes and cylinders to get a more structured sense of how the figure is sitting in the space.

I also notice some major anatomy flaws, specially in the neck area and upper torso. It might be worth going back and take several days just drilling some figure drawing fundamentals.

Good luck dud.

Thank for the imput Jeso i spoted the neck by myself when i came back after letting it rest but your right my figure are stiff i keep deflecting it with the idea that i am more concern about other stuff right now i think it will correct itself as i draw more figure in perspective like you suggested.I am not trying to go into into the illustration realm so i am limiting my gesture to be somewhat less dynamic so that thing read more than they communicate an action but idk right now that might just be some limitation i have toward more dynamic pose.It more of a character sheet than a illustration if you see what i mean.I tried to start with a different view then i normally do where the character is facing us because i knew it would be a challenge for me.Even with my few years in art.Figure isn't my strongest suit it such a complex subject i rarely ever get to build enough confidence to even get close to touching it but i am starting to break through.

Perhaps a draw over would show me how much i should listen to your advise.