06-13-2020, 09:38 AM
Simplify your approch i think your chewing more than you can chew right now.
Let talk about here the hair as an example it look more like some fabric than it look like hair in my opinion i also see that your brush stroke aren't really showing you control what your doing it more like guess work sometime and there time where you even go outside the line that a big nono in general unless it done with attention to look interesting and complement the piece.
Also it strange how you mix lineart with certain area that look more painted without outline it just isn't working for me.You can mix both having a painterly feel and outline but where you need to make a choose is if you have or not outline around the figure.Maybe it just that your showing art work who are still work in progress.
One other thing is how your cloth show you don't understand how it wrap around the figure.I know it probably not what you want to hear but it the best time to hear it.If you want to have fun with drawing get the hard stuff out the way or just going to be a struggle because you fight all the way to the finish and realize you aim to high.It hard to explain what i mean by get the hard stuff out of the way but let resume it to everything your are not doing and you know you should be doing to improve your drawing.It kinda hard for you to understand what this mean if you don't know want what kind of drawing you want to make.Well let say the more you know what kind of stuff you like to draw the better you get there faster.
I know it not fun to have someone pop the ballon when maybe all you want is to have fun.But if you want to see your skill improve it a good idea to consider what i said.
Your already on a good start if your doing the draw box exercuse so don't forget to post them in here they might be hard to show but don't worry about that it worst not showing them at all.
Let talk about here the hair as an example it look more like some fabric than it look like hair in my opinion i also see that your brush stroke aren't really showing you control what your doing it more like guess work sometime and there time where you even go outside the line that a big nono in general unless it done with attention to look interesting and complement the piece.
Also it strange how you mix lineart with certain area that look more painted without outline it just isn't working for me.You can mix both having a painterly feel and outline but where you need to make a choose is if you have or not outline around the figure.Maybe it just that your showing art work who are still work in progress.
One other thing is how your cloth show you don't understand how it wrap around the figure.I know it probably not what you want to hear but it the best time to hear it.If you want to have fun with drawing get the hard stuff out the way or just going to be a struggle because you fight all the way to the finish and realize you aim to high.It hard to explain what i mean by get the hard stuff out of the way but let resume it to everything your are not doing and you know you should be doing to improve your drawing.It kinda hard for you to understand what this mean if you don't know want what kind of drawing you want to make.Well let say the more you know what kind of stuff you like to draw the better you get there faster.
I know it not fun to have someone pop the ballon when maybe all you want is to have fun.But if you want to see your skill improve it a good idea to consider what i said.
Your already on a good start if your doing the draw box exercuse so don't forget to post them in here they might be hard to show but don't worry about that it worst not showing them at all.