Fickle's Thread
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What going on no collarbone and what going on with the hand?I don't understand what going on with her hair it like her hair are in a bag of some kind.The left side flowing line from the waterfall i don't like how they lead the eye out of the piece.There also the line at the bottom right that conflict with the silhouette of the women you might want to avoid them touching.Your control of black a white is still pretty impressive nothing less but yea it an art to make thing read with such a limited amount of value.

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Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-13-2020, 03:00 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by darktiste - 06-13-2020, 04:46 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Artloader - 06-13-2020, 08:35 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Zorrentos - 06-14-2020, 11:06 PM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-15-2020, 07:59 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by darktiste - 06-15-2020, 08:28 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Leo Ki - 06-15-2020, 11:09 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-16-2020, 07:03 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Pubic Enemy - 06-16-2020, 08:15 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by darktiste - 06-16-2020, 08:38 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-17-2020, 07:20 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by graphicnovelist - 06-20-2020, 11:09 PM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-21-2020, 03:49 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 10:13 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-24-2020, 02:29 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by darktiste - 06-24-2020, 03:57 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-26-2020, 06:45 AM
RE: Fickle's Thread - by Fickleflame - 06-26-2020, 06:49 AM

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