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Hey, I've got a little critique concerning the pose, mostly. I hope these drawings are good at explaining how i think you could improve it (even tho they're kinda crappy). I really suggest taking your own reference for the pose to really figure what you want and what can work. 
I also did a crappy paintover to add another source of light. I don't think you necessarily need the other light, but i think it would be nice if you found some way to add a red/orange accent color to contrast the green atmosphere (which i really like) and guide the eye towards the focal point (prolly the face and the bell, which is why you might want to get the bell a bit closer to the camera)


Hope i helped someway