Making a graphic novel / manga

[darktiste]

I think what really bother me in your work is when you put a blank background behind your character if your gonna do that atleast frame your subject n a way where the subject take most of the space or it just empty space and waste of space on a page and it gonna add to your cost if you intend to produce it later on.Look at the first frame of your example as example of what i mean by using framing and blank background or if you want to make a ''blank'' background use the action line like in the third square to make thing more interesting.