12-21-2020, 10:35 AM
I really like the last 2 character designs from secret valley, they look polished but still have a nice stylized appeal to them. If its ok for me to make a small, nitpicky crit: on the male character the the moustace is not very visible on the rendering so he looks a bit younger than the lineart (idk if this was an intentional redesign); the girl's render seems to have her chin protruding a bit more than the lineart (due to the way the highlight goes around the chin) and this makes her seem a bit less feminine to me compared to the lineart. These are just small details however, the overall impression is still very nice. Hope this helps :)