12-29-2020, 05:14 PM
Hi there one advise for you would be to reduce the noise there alot of thing going on that nice but it can also be confusing to look at.You need to have place for the eye to rest.You got nice pattern but sometime you gain to have simple design with big story over to much design and getting the story lost.
Also you seem to be drawing with a mechanical pen if i am right.I suggest a simple pencil for better control and a bolder outline so that when you take picture we can see your pattern alot better atm they are so thin they get lost in the white of the paper in my opinion.You can switch to the mechanical pen for when you want to do more precise pattern.With the pencil you will have a much easier flexibility to deal with your tone over a mechanical pen and you will be able to experiment with hatching of different type if you which to do so.
In regard to how your posting your work i got an other suggestion maybe you could take picture near a ajustable lamp if you have or if you can get one.If you can't afford that don't worry maybe if you want you can if you like to draw over your pencil sketch with a marker or ink pen for darker and bolder line for better visibility.
There also a concept in art call line weight i invite you to learn more about it i am sure you will get much better read utilizing this new concept .
Also you seem to be drawing with a mechanical pen if i am right.I suggest a simple pencil for better control and a bolder outline so that when you take picture we can see your pattern alot better atm they are so thin they get lost in the white of the paper in my opinion.You can switch to the mechanical pen for when you want to do more precise pattern.With the pencil you will have a much easier flexibility to deal with your tone over a mechanical pen and you will be able to experiment with hatching of different type if you which to do so.
In regard to how your posting your work i got an other suggestion maybe you could take picture near a ajustable lamp if you have or if you can get one.If you can't afford that don't worry maybe if you want you can if you like to draw over your pencil sketch with a marker or ink pen for darker and bolder line for better visibility.
There also a concept in art call line weight i invite you to learn more about it i am sure you will get much better read utilizing this new concept .