01-15-2021, 11:03 PM
Wow, guys! Thank you so much for your criticism and feedback! It helps so much to be able to post these artworks on the forum first so that I can fix the errors before I post them to my main galleries! I really appreciate you taking the time! :)
@ chubby_cat:
Thank you for the crits. I have re-arranged the elements and replaced the font color. Hopefully, it reads better now. Also, I will post the final image with a fully rendered character as well, hopefully, this will help the weight of the image composition.
@ tchangchang.
Thanks for the crits! I am applying them to the final composition of the image. The project is 100% a personal project that I'm making just to learn and have a nice final portfolio piece. I like the idea of working and learning towards making one big, final product for my portfolio.
@ JyonnyNovice
Thanks a lot for the crits and the kind words! Your suggestion was really excellent, so I decided to change the format to match that artbook style better! Hope it works better now :)
So I have continued to work. I'm trying to constantly research, iterate, and work on these tasks and make sure to finish them all. Now and then, I get an interview with some company that I need to prioritize since I'm still looking for a full-time position at a studio.
These past few weeks, I have visited some family and friends. I brought my computer, so I could still work half-time and relax the other half with my family and friends. I am now back home, so hopefully my productivity will go up significantly! I also got a freelance job I need to finish, so that will take some priority.
Here is a small update with a new layout for my design. Not final in any way, but maybe it works better?
Also, I want to share two AMAZING articles about character design in Mobile Games that I found on Linkedin. They are written in Russian, but you should be able to follow along nicely with google translate:
https://ab-games.com/2021/01/12/kak-sozd...rsonazhej/
https://ab-games.com/2020/04/01/kak-sozd...-hopa-igr/
They contain some very useful pointers about the process in overall character design and art direction.
Ok, that's it for now. I Will update you soon again because I have a lot of stuff in the making! Cheers guys! :)
@ chubby_cat:
Thank you for the crits. I have re-arranged the elements and replaced the font color. Hopefully, it reads better now. Also, I will post the final image with a fully rendered character as well, hopefully, this will help the weight of the image composition.
@ tchangchang.
Thanks for the crits! I am applying them to the final composition of the image. The project is 100% a personal project that I'm making just to learn and have a nice final portfolio piece. I like the idea of working and learning towards making one big, final product for my portfolio.
@ JyonnyNovice
Thanks a lot for the crits and the kind words! Your suggestion was really excellent, so I decided to change the format to match that artbook style better! Hope it works better now :)
So I have continued to work. I'm trying to constantly research, iterate, and work on these tasks and make sure to finish them all. Now and then, I get an interview with some company that I need to prioritize since I'm still looking for a full-time position at a studio.
These past few weeks, I have visited some family and friends. I brought my computer, so I could still work half-time and relax the other half with my family and friends. I am now back home, so hopefully my productivity will go up significantly! I also got a freelance job I need to finish, so that will take some priority.
Here is a small update with a new layout for my design. Not final in any way, but maybe it works better?
Also, I want to share two AMAZING articles about character design in Mobile Games that I found on Linkedin. They are written in Russian, but you should be able to follow along nicely with google translate:
https://ab-games.com/2021/01/12/kak-sozd...rsonazhej/
https://ab-games.com/2020/04/01/kak-sozd...-hopa-igr/
They contain some very useful pointers about the process in overall character design and art direction.
Ok, that's it for now. I Will update you soon again because I have a lot of stuff in the making! Cheers guys! :)