01-23-2021, 05:13 PM
I think it really nice but they are problem with symmetry in my opinion it tend to create a feeling of solidy and stillness.I do give you that there some asymmetry of the glass and in the texture which help break that.I also i think the canva itself since it squarish increase even more that symmetry aspect.So it nothing against the piece itself it more to bring up the importance of utilizing the frame also to sell your idea and to support the omposition.A head shot tend to be static anyways i would say it really the emotion and the angle of the head that could for me create a more dynamic composition if that something you wanted instead.I think you have great skill i am maybe over analyzing thing asking myself for example if you did any iteration in term of composition i am also thinking about if your next big step wouldn't be to pay more attention to composition and framing maybe you could do some movie study idk how you go about learning composition since most of the thing i see are personal piece do you do composition study on the side?