06-08-2021, 02:18 AM
The design is bottom heavy in term of where are the small,medium,big shape they are that big strange shape on a stick and the ''turbo feet'' Even if there is still a nice gesture and flowé
Her face is really unexpressive which can be ok if your a total begginer i guess or if that what you intended but you also want to avoid the it the only expression i put on every single character i do.In term of functionability i have trouble to imagine he feet fitting somewhere inside so i am gonna pretend like she amputed... sometime create story with thing that doesn't make sense can be cool for personal piece but that if you can because something you just can't afford the luxury of your design not being functional to certain demand.There also probably a problem of weight like how would she be able to balance when those turbo feet are not activate there size can suggest weight but it also sci-fi so it could be extremly light metal but that up to the person who design those world to determine this kind of design make sense or not.
You seem interest by two field which seem to be illustration and character design i suggest you try to narrow down a little bit on one more than the other if you intend to pursue art as more than a hobby.
Her face is really unexpressive which can be ok if your a total begginer i guess or if that what you intended but you also want to avoid the it the only expression i put on every single character i do.In term of functionability i have trouble to imagine he feet fitting somewhere inside so i am gonna pretend like she amputed... sometime create story with thing that doesn't make sense can be cool for personal piece but that if you can because something you just can't afford the luxury of your design not being functional to certain demand.There also probably a problem of weight like how would she be able to balance when those turbo feet are not activate there size can suggest weight but it also sci-fi so it could be extremly light metal but that up to the person who design those world to determine this kind of design make sense or not.
You seem interest by two field which seem to be illustration and character design i suggest you try to narrow down a little bit on one more than the other if you intend to pursue art as more than a hobby.