Zizka's Sketchbook (Nudity and Vulgarity, NSFW)

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I can already tell you added to much hair on the top.Also the eye pit are much darker due to the execessive orc browridge than you shown so far.The nose ring is crooked.You also didn't describe the underside lips shadow.I also think you need to hit your darker dark harder but that can wait for later that just an oberservation that might come useful for later.

But of course that critic on wip so take everything i said as observation.

Keep going