I need critique to get better.

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Do you have more finish work or more thing to show?This is still to limited of a sample to address specific issue.

Loomis - Figure Drawing For All It's Worth

is a good and common suggested book for figure drawing.But really it come down to what you want to draw that really what is missing in term of information you could provide use with for good book recommendation that would complement the one i suggested.

Sorry for the late answer, but that is one of my problems right now. I am not sure what I should do, something more realistic, cartoony or a combination of the two. If you have a book recommendation about this topic I would deeply appreciate it.

Base on that (Loomis - Figure Drawing For All It's Worth) for the fundamental and more realistic approch and

if you want to try cartoony supplement with (Andrew Loomis - Fun WIth a Pencil)

The idea is to try thing be fearless it part of the artistic growth.

Just have in mind that fundamental are what you should strive to build as your foundation to branch out into your own direction.