09-21-2021, 05:42 PM
Hey!
The Star Wars piece turned out great! Love the values and color choices, also the perspective on the x-wings in the background is cool. Maybe someone remarked on this before, but the hilts or handles of the light sabers are both a bit off. They basically look a bit rubbery now because they're not straight. I do this aaaall the time myself 'coz i'm lazy, but I guess using a simple ruler would fix a problem like this hehe. Anyway something to think about next time doing something similar.
New sketch is looking good! Think the star could probably follow the form of her chest even more though. Put a slight perspective on it. :)
Cheers!
The Star Wars piece turned out great! Love the values and color choices, also the perspective on the x-wings in the background is cool. Maybe someone remarked on this before, but the hilts or handles of the light sabers are both a bit off. They basically look a bit rubbery now because they're not straight. I do this aaaall the time myself 'coz i'm lazy, but I guess using a simple ruler would fix a problem like this hehe. Anyway something to think about next time doing something similar.
New sketch is looking good! Think the star could probably follow the form of her chest even more though. Put a slight perspective on it. :)
Cheers!