10-28-2021, 01:17 AM
Great sketches, you seem to have a good flow going on so far. I agree with RottenPocket, with your pencils they seem to be too soft and need a bit more structure to the drawing. I would look at Bridgman and how he constructs his linework, then with that as a base drawing, render on top of that and make sure to keep an eye on maintaining your shadows. Keep up the good work, and can't wait to see more!