Looking for a critique
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I feel like there a few small things that can really improve it, if something doesnt make sense let me know ( ˆ˘ˆ)

- I feel like grey background rarely looks good. 
- Composition looks better when the picture border is intersecting with some elements in the picture
- I think it looks better to keep outer linework in the highlights of the armor, the style looks more consistent between elements that way. 
- Skin looks better if its more saturated in mid tones.
- Hairstyles look better if hair strands have more similar length. 
- The really dark shape that her elbow was creating brought too much attention to itself with too much contrast, so I softened it up with a little bloom

can't explain face changes, I just played with it until it felt better ( ´▽`) 

it's a nice picture overall, and can be made into really badass art ( ۶ˆ˘ˆ)۶ 

upd. just remembered that I also have a process timelapse, it will probably help too https://mega.nz/file/EAg3DQjY#PPnTDSyPbF...xJlb1O1Pr0


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Looking for a critique - by Bananus the Tyrant - 10-28-2021, 10:20 PM
RE: Looking for a critique - by darktiste - 10-28-2021, 11:52 PM
RE: Looking for a critique - by lu1108 - 11-09-2021, 04:44 AM
RE: Looking for a critique - by lu1108 - 11-10-2021, 05:42 AM
RE: Looking for a critique - by xelfereht - 11-10-2021, 11:32 PM

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