11-10-2021, 11:32 PM
you already got a nice paint over so cool,
I think the intention in the pose could feel a little less forced.
the way the food is being held feels a little awkward how its almost at an angle to fall out and feels a bit out of place with the energy of the top half of the piece.
perhaps a little more natural/dynamic posing of the lower arm would sell a bit more feeling.
subjective of course but just feedback based on my reaction to it, not to discount your efforts.
her right arm looks great particularly. well done
I think the intention in the pose could feel a little less forced.
the way the food is being held feels a little awkward how its almost at an angle to fall out and feels a bit out of place with the energy of the top half of the piece.
perhaps a little more natural/dynamic posing of the lower arm would sell a bit more feeling.
subjective of course but just feedback based on my reaction to it, not to discount your efforts.
her right arm looks great particularly. well done