12-02-2021, 04:47 AM
The cat fur is kinda over powering in term of highlight. Where is the bottom light coming from ??? Also i think the yellow reflecting from the cat gear necklace might be over done so reduce the yellow specially since it shouldn't be all around since there a slight wrapping of undershirt around the neck .
Remember that value control and planning is a better solution to putting glare on object to make them ''pop''.
I added a blur to certain spot to diminish the overall focus of those area.I also kinda ajusted the cylinder behind it back and adjust it to reflect how i think the light should affect it.
Also remember to take time in the line art phase to check for tangente there one with the hat and the cat ear.
I ajusted the collar value since the light come from the top left.
I also added a little bit of stronger shadow where two surface touch for example the forearm against the upper arm creating a crease.
Remember that value control and planning is a better solution to putting glare on object to make them ''pop''.
I added a blur to certain spot to diminish the overall focus of those area.I also kinda ajusted the cylinder behind it back and adjust it to reflect how i think the light should affect it.
Also remember to take time in the line art phase to check for tangente there one with the hat and the cat ear.
I ajusted the collar value since the light come from the top left.
I also added a little bit of stronger shadow where two surface touch for example the forearm against the upper arm creating a crease.